Leaving his hometown as a recent college graduate and new teacher, Andrew moved to Miami, where he had done his student teaching. Rewrite, beginning with:
As a recent college graduate and new teacher... The next words will be
Leaving his hometown as a recent college graduate and new teacher, Andrew moved to Miami, where he had done his student teaching. Rewrite, beginning with:
As a recent college graduate and new teacher... The next words will be
As a recent college graduate and new teacher, Andrew left his hometown and moved to Miami, where he had done his student teaching. This option maintains the grammatical integrity and logical flow of the sentence, ensuring that the subject (Andrew) is clearly identified early in the sentence.
Andrew left his hometown
As a recent college graduate and new teacher, Andrew moved to Miami, the city where he had completed his student teaching.
As a recent college graduate and new teacher, Andrew moved to Miami, the city where he had completed his student teaching.